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So yea, I have a question for all of you. As I've been writing the story for my two characters, Whisp and Wynra I've begun to feel that Whisp is becoming somewhat of a Mary Sue type character. I made a poll with this question about a week ago but got no responses so I'm just putting this up so that people might see it. Here is the poll: whispricusfox.deviantart.com/j…. If you don't know anything about Whisp, here is a portion of the story so you learn about him: whispricusfox.deviantart.com/a…
I'm just trying to get input from other people to decide if I've gone too far with his magic.
I'm just trying to get input from other people to decide if I've gone too far with his magic.
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I just need to figure this out so I can make some adjustments. Not sure exactly what category something like this would go in...
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nah he's fine