Interjection

In my story about Whisp and Wynra, Whisp is the narrator. Sometimes he and Wynra interrupt the narrative and make comments. I set it up with an interruption starting off the story to give the feeling that Whisp is sitting in the room with the reader telling his and Wynra's story. Now, I worked really hard to make Whisp as much like myself as I could; though I didn't include my comedic side because it doesn't fit in yet- speaking of interruptions, excuse me a moment while I skip a track in my playlist- (and yes, I did actually do that in the middle of writing my description. That's not for random comedic effect) Erm...where was I? Oh yes, so, Whisp is my fursona so he shares my personality and general wants and desires. Wynra is sorta the kind of girl I'm looking for...honestly, I gave Whisp a girl because I am 17 and have never really had any relationships, and it's something I more or less would like, so having fictional me have a mate makes me happy. I think the problem is that I'm kinda introverted. I don't talk much at school unless I'm around people I know well and I don't really show much emotion (unless sleepyness is an emotion) either. Anyway, yea. I don't want to spoil the plot. Trust me, it will be a long time before this project is complete. I've git two books I'm working on. One, "Wild", is almost finished (just gotta finish the climax, falling action, and resolution and then revise) and the other, "A Tale of Two Foxes", is just in the beginning.